5 Automated Outreach Email Templates That Actually Get Replies

TalentLumia Team
7/15/2025
5 Automated Outreach Email Templates That Actually Get Replies
Recruitment automation is powerful, but "automated" should not mean "impersonal." The biggest mistake recruiters make is sending generic, self-serving outreach emails that are instantly deleted. Top candidates are solicited constantly; your message needs to stand out.
The key is "structured personalization." Create a template that is 80% automated but has a clear, mandatory 20% section for genuine, manual personalization. Here are 5 templates built on this principle, designed for multi-step automated sequences.
Template 1: The "Specific Accomplishment" Hook
Best for: Candidates with clear, public achievements (e.g., spoke at a conference, published an article, major project on GitHub).
Subject: Your work on {{Project_Name}}
Body:
Hi {{FirstName}}
,
I'm {{YourName}}
, a recruiter at {{CompanyName}}
.
I saw your recent talk on {{Topic}}
at the {{ConferenceName}}
conference. [This is the 20% manual part. Add a specific, genuine comment. E.g., "Your point about state management in large-scale React apps was particularly insightful and sparked a debate on our own team."]
Engineers who appreciate that level of detail are exactly the type of people we're looking for at {{CompanyName}}
. We're currently looking for a Senior Frontend Engineer to help us solve similar challenges in the {{Industry}}
space.
Would you be open to a brief, 15-minute chat next week to hear a bit more?
Best,
{{YourName}}
Why it works: It proves you've done your research and value their specific expertise, not just their job title.
Template 2: The "Shared Connection" Approach
Best for: Candidates who previously worked at the same company as you or a current employee.
Subject: From one {{Ex_CompanyName}}
alum to another
Body:
Hi {{FirstName}}
,
I'm {{YourName}}
from {{CompanyName}}
.
I was doing some research and saw that you used to work at {{Ex_CompanyName}}
– I was there from {{Your_Start_Year}}
to {{Your_End_Year}}
. [Manual 20% part. E.g., "I hope you enjoyed your time there as much as I did. I was on the marketing team; not sure if we ever crossed paths, but it's a small world!"]
The experience people gain there in {{Skill_Learned_at_Ex_Company}}
is highly relevant to a role I'm recruiting for now: {{Role_Name}}
. We're building a team that values that same rigor and innovative spirit.
If you're open to it, I'd love to connect for a brief chat about what we're building.
Regards,
{{YourName}}
Why it works: It establishes immediate, genuine common ground and creates a sense of an "in-group."
Template 3: The "Company Growth" Angle
Best for: Passive candidates who are likely happy in their current role. The goal is to sell the opportunity, not just the job.
Subject: {{Their_CompanyName}}
-> {{Your_CompanyName}}
?
Body:
Hi {{FirstName}}
,
My name is {{YourName}}
, and I head up talent for {{Your_Team}}
at {{CompanyName}}
.
I've been following {{Their_CompanyName}}
's success for a while. Your experience in {{Their_Key_Accomplishment}}
is impressive and likely a key part of that growth.
We're at a similar inflection point here at {{CompanyName}}
. We just secured our Series B funding and are scaling our {{Department_Name}}
team to build out a new {{Product_Name}}
. [Manual 20% part. Explain why them. E.g., "Your background in scaling data infrastructure is exactly the expertise we need to ensure our platform is ready for the 10x growth we're projecting."]
This is a pivotal role for us, and I thought of you immediately. Would you be open to a confidential conversation about our roadmap?
Thanks,
{{YourName}}
Why it works: It appeals to a candidate's ambition and desire to have a major impact, framing it as a career-defining move.
Template 4: The Hyper-Concise, Mobile-Friendly Follow-Up
Best for: The second or third step in an automated sequence when the first email gets no reply.
Subject: Re: Your work on {{Project_Name}}
Body:
Hi {{FirstName}}
,
Just wanted to quickly follow up on my previous email.
Our team was really impressed with your background in {{Key_Skill}}
, and I believe our {{Role_Name}}
role could be a significant step up in terms of {{Key_Benefit_like_Scope_or_Impact}}
.
Is this of any interest?
Best,
{{YourName}}
Why it works: It's easy to read on a phone. The direct question "Is this of any interest?" is a low-friction call to action that often gets a simple "yes" or "no," which is better than no reply at all.
Template 5: The "Breakup" Email
Best for: The final step in a sequence. It's a last-ditch effort that often has a surprisingly high response rate.
Subject: Closing the loop
Body:
Hi {{FirstName}}
,
I've reached out a few times about our {{Role_Name}}
position at {{CompanyName}}
, but haven't heard back, so I'll assume the timing isn't right for you.
I won't contact you again about this role, but please feel free to reach out if anything changes in the future.
Best of luck with everything at {{Their_CompanyName}}
.
Regards,
{{YourName}}
Why it works: It uses psychology: fear of missing out (FOMO) and the principle of reciprocity. By "taking something away," you often prompt the other person to finally respond.
By implementing these structured templates in your outreach automation tool, you can scale your sourcing efforts without sacrificing the human touch that actually gets results.